If you have the
opportunity to change the ending plot of the novel,what would you like to see?
Firstly I would
like to see father come down to the compound of the house and hug her daughter Dawan
before she leaves to the city.Father must express his apology to Dawan for being
so mean and harsh from the beginning of the novel until the day he finally gave
his blessings to her.At the same time,he must give advice to Dawan on how to
take care of herself when she is exposed to city life.Most importantly he must
give words of encouragement to Dawan to study hard and come back to help uplift
the status and life of her family and the villagers.
Secondly,it is
proper for the writer to put Dawan’s sibling,Kwai on the bus together with his sister.The reason
being is because it is a frightening journey for Dawan to proceed to the city
alone without anybody accompanying her.Hence the parents and ofcourse grandma
would be happy to see Dawan together with Kwai on the bus and accompany her
right to the doorstep of the college.Dawan’s journey would be meaningful and
safe.
