Thursday, September 20, 2018

Continous writing SPM...Karim was sitting down in a cafe , lighting his cigarette. He kept on


Open to any readers who would like to continue the plot….

Karim was sitting down in a cafe , lighting his cigarette. He kept on
Karim was sitting in a cafe lighting his cigarette. He kept on looking at his watch. His friend, Afghan supposed to meet him at 10.00am sharp. But, the time is already showing 11.00am. His blood boiled as he had waited  for Afghan for more than an hour. Then, the phone rang, "Karim, its done. I see you at Caltex Station now" said Afghan.
 Karim was satisfied because Afghan had completed  his task. He then quickly rode  his motorcycle and headed  to the Caltex Station that was just a stone throw away from the cafe.
Karim was an orphan. His parents were involved in a fatal and gruesome accident. Luckily, he still had a grandmother. He lived with his grandma since he was 16 years olds. His life changed after the death of his parents.His grandmother  always told the neighbor next door that Karim  was a kind hearted, and good boy.He  has changed over time  and now he becomes a  bad boy.He befriended some of the bad companies  in his village. His grandmother had always advised him to stay away from  them.Karim  turned into deaf ears.Years flew by,Karim is  already 23 years old. His grandma felt  devastated that Karim's behavior had turned from bad to worse.
"Good job dude. Did you do like what i asked you?" Karim asked when he met Afghan, Afghan nodded and smiled. " I kidnapped  the man that you asked and shot  him”
“What?”Karim was extremely shocked.
“You should not worry about his corpse because my boy will manage him”
  Afghan voiced out confidently.
.Karim shouted in anger.“ I never  ask you to shoot him” An angry frown creased his forehead. He did not agree with Afghan’s  action.
 Frightening thoughts race through Karim’s  mind. Afghan didn’t follow his instruction.But the man that Afghan shot was responsible for his parent’s death Infact Karim was in dilemma.Karim planned to run away.He did not want the case later forwarded to the police and he would be for more trouble.
Afghan realized this and he voiced out angrily,"Where are you going? I have  already completed my task and where is my money?" .Karim was panicked and without hesitation, he sped away with his motorcycle but was stopped by Afghan..
"Stop right there! Dont you dare to run away from me!" shouted Afghan. Karim managed to speed off for the second time and headed to nowhere..He has stopped at one quiet place and whispered to himself, “I am lucky now,I have manage to escape from this  dangerous man. He could not believe that Afghan had killed that man . "It is so unbelievable" said Karim.
Then he decided heading  home.As he reached home,he wasn’t comfortable.He thought of reporting to the authority but if he did that, he would also be  arrested as it was his plan to kidnap that man. Her grandma looked at him with full of curiosity.
The next morning while he was sleeping in his room, he heard his grandma was screaming" Help me, help me!"Karim dashed outside and saw his grandma was at knife point by one of Afghan's gang members. There was a sharp knife on his grandma’s throat.
Paralyzed with fear, he could not command his legs to move.He was totally in dilemma..In a split second, Afghan used this confusing moment and stabbed Karim with his knife. Karim fell down motionless.His blood spurted  profusely and gushed  out like a fountain. His soul has gone.His death was brutal .

Afghan and two others sped away in an old blue mercedez.They headed to the border...............

Sunday, September 16, 2018

NARRATIVE ESSAY:THEME(FRIENDSHIP).


NARRATIVE ESSAY:THEME(FRIENDSHIP).
Begin your story as follows: The sky was dark. There was roaring of thunders  and flashes of lightnings………..

The sky was dark. There was roaring of thunders and flashes of lightnings indicating a heavy rain would be falling soon. All of us are waiting anxiously for Daniel's arrival. Frightening thoughts raced through our mind.We were at loss for words. Suddenly gust of rain fell down like bullets. It was so heavy. Alif nervously took his handphone and tried to call Daniel. There was no response. A haze of fear surrounded him.His other mates Haiqal ,Fahmi,faiz  were on the brink of tears.Panic started to engulf them.
I recalled vividly of the good  old memories.Those nostalgic moments when we were in form 3.  Haiqal ,Fahmi,Daniel,Alif and I  were best friends then.Now with our outstanding results in SPM,we went  separate ways.We were chosen to study overseas. Thanks to the Almighty.We were all over the moon.But our friendship was not over yet. 

Every semester holidays,we would assemble in our so-called 'club' and hang out till wee hours in the morning.We were saturated with happiness whenever we met because those were the best times we could chit chat until the next morning.

A long semester holidays was coming so we planned many things.As usual our “club” would be our meeting place.Except for Daniel,he  had to stay back a week longer due to his incomplete project paper. Daniel was scheduled to arrive exactly on his birthday. So this time we had planned a grand celebration and would call our female ex-classmates. So we collected some money together to celebrate the occasion.

We did everything such as car wash, cleaning  resident’s backyard, painting and many more odd jobs  to buy many things to  celebrate  the occasion.We also  took some time to wrap  special present for Daniel.

Finally August 16th is here, Danial finally  touched down at KLIA exactly 12 noon. We gave him a call and asked him to come to our usual club at   'Taman Tengku Anis' first before he  could stop anywhere. He knew next to nothing about our plan.Our  plan was interrupted when I heard Alif's phone rang. I could  see from Alif’s  face that it was  a bad news.Copious tears welled up in his eyes.His eyes were brimming with tears.We were wondering  what went wrong.Dark clouds seemed to overloom our heads.Alif revealed that the taxi that took Daniel skidded and hit a divider.The driver failed to apply a brake when a motorcycle was seen making a sudden u-turn.

The driver instead hit a big shady creepy tree and the car just blew up in seconds.We felt the whole weight of the world were dropping heavily upon our shoulder.The driver and the passengers  of the vehicles were found dead.We knew that Danial was one of the passengers. Our happiness had  just turned into a worst nightmare.

When we were at the cemetery,we could not speak in front of his grave as if there were big lumps in our  throat.Without any tinge of doubt,we were definitely going to miss Danial.He had  carried with him all those nostalgic moments.Our eyes were puffy and red.Droplets of copious tears were dripping down from our cheeks.We could do nothing but felt our heart had been ripped off……no matter what,our good friend,Daniel still remained in our heart.